Showing posts with label Daniel J. Hale. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Daniel J. Hale. Show all posts

Monday, June 23, 2014

Wordcraft -- Finding the path through our stories, part II

At the last meeting of the Dallas Mystery Writers, professional authors swooned over Daniel J. Hale’s discussion of plot structure. After outlining the three-act (or as he termed it, the four-act) structure of novels, he applied his method to the 12-step Writer’s Journey work of screenwriter Christopher Vogler.

Vogler’s initial memo while working for Disney was based on the writings of Joseph Campbell. Later expanded into book form, it postulated that stories are based on mythological narratives in twelve specific stages, giving writers a road map of places that must be visited during the course of the story. Vogler termed these stages The Ordinary World, Call to Adventure, Refusal of the Call, Meeting with the Mentor and Crossing the First Threshold; Tests, Allies and Enemies; Approach to the Inmost Cave; Ordeal and Reward; and The Road Back, Resurrection and Return with the Elixir.

The Writer’s Journey method is taught in Southern Methodist University’s creative writing program which Hale teaches. Vogler’s terms map onto the three-act story discussed last week like this: Act One opens with a picture of the Ordinary World. It moves to the Call to Adventure, effectively the story’s “hook,” but often followed by the Refusal of the Call as the hero recognizes the danger of taking necessary action. A Meeting with the Mentor persuades the hero to undertake the necessary journey or other action, and prompting the him or her to Cross the First Threshold. Crossing the threshold is the decision point that pushes the story into its second act.

Act II includes a series of Tests and meetings with various allies and enemies, building through the Approach to the Inmost Cave and the Ordeal, Vogler’s apt term for the midpoint crisis that, in the three-act structure propels the story into the second half of Act II. At this point, the hero will gain some respite or knowledge from the encounter with the antagonist, the Reward that will aid the final struggle and precipitates the third act.

Act III opens with The Road Back, as the hero makes use of what he or she has learned in Act II, moving toward the climatic scene. Vogler’s term for the final struggle is Resurrection, followed by the Return with the Elixir. At this point, I find Vogler’s terminology sometimes more poetic than helpful. Sometimes the hero--Romeo for example--may die in the “Resurrection” scene. And “what the heck is an elixir,” is a question that‘s come up more than once in classes. I found it more helpful to recall that what Vogler terms Resurrection is more conventionally termed the story’s climactic moment. And the elixir is what the hero‘s world gains from his or her struggle (or even death).

In his presentation to the Dallas Mystery Writers this month, Hale emphasized that the twelve-step structure “is a structure, not a formula. It’s a tool to use to develop your story. Every character in your book has a hero’s journey. For some of your minor characters, you’re not going to see all their hero’s journey. What I do when I start a book is to layout the hero’s journey as a start. Initially, I will write the resurrection, which is the big fight scene, so I know where I’m going. And then (the course of the story changes) but I have a destination in mind.”

For more about the SMU creative writing program, see www.smu.edu/Simmons/CommunityEnrichment/CreativeWriting/.

I joined the Dallas Mystery Writers because I a) write suspenseful stories and b) was impressed by the curriculum at last year’s Mystery University it hosted. The speaker lineup for the monthly meetings is wonderfully informative for both pro and novice writers. See
http://dallasmysterywriters.com/ for meeting information and programs.

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Other information for writers--Dallas-area fantasy/sci-fi conference FenCon seeks material for its annual short story contest, with payment in cash and prizes. Deadline is July 20. Or in you’re in grades three through 12 (or know an aspiring writer who is) FenCon’s Young Authors Short Story Contest offers cash, prizes and publication. Deadline is September 10. For rules and other information for both contests, see
www.fencon.org/.

(Next Monday--Don’t hate me because I scored a ticket to hear Diana Gabaldon speak at the Dallas Museum of Arts program. I’ll bring you news from the master--or should that be mistress?--of historical romantic fiction.)

Monday, June 16, 2014

Wordcraft -- Finding the path through our stories, part I

At a critique group this past weekend, a member apologized for not submitting anything, because she’s just been so busy learning how to craft plots, and surely nobody would want to hear about that. Not! Developing a plot is right up there with character building in a writer’s box of essential tools, as Agatha winning mystery author Daniel J. Hale revealed at this month’s meeting of the Dallas Mystery Writers.

Hale is a past executive vice president of the Mystery Writers of America and an instructor at The Writer’s Path program in creative writing at Southern Methodist University. With his nephew, Matthew LeBrot, he co-writes the middle-grade Zeke Armstrong mystery series. Most recently, Hale’s short story “In the Air” appeared in the 2013 anthology Dallas Noir. He provided a synthesis of the traditional three-act structure and the 12-step method of screenwriter Christopher Vogler’s book, The Writer’s Journey.

This post will include Hale’s discussion of the three-act structure. Next Monday, I’ll let him show us how to map Vogler’s steps onto the act structure.

The three-act structure opens by introducing the main character and his initial problem. (Hale apologized for using the male pronoun “he” to describe the main character. Although this discussion applies to both male and female characters, for simplicity, I’ll follow his terminology.)

The first act covers approximately the first quarter of the story, and ends with a decision by the main character to take action--effectively, stepping over a threshold. Although the hero of the story may have tried to avoid taking decisive action early in the first act, for the story to continue into act two, the hero must “of his own volition, step over the line,” entering what Vogler terms “the special world,” that is, the world of the story. Hale emphasized that the need for the character to make a decision at this point. “If he’s pushed into the special world, he’s not in the special world because he hasn’t made the decision. The hero has to be heroic.”


The second act covers about three-quarters of the story’s length of running time, and deals with the heart of the conflict between characters’ wants and needs. The third act resolves the conflict in the last quarter of the story.

“It’s actually four acts,” Hale said. “What you don’t see in this three-act structure is the middle of Act 2, where something also changes.” That change, like the one leading from the first act to the opening of the second, is precipitated by the main character, becoming a second threshold for the hero to cross.

The third act also includes a threshold, the climax, a struggle which the hero must win (although not necessarily survive) to complete the story.

Despite the use of the term “conflict,” the tension driving the story is not necessarily violence, or even physical action. It’s the difference between what the character, often mistakenly, wants at the beginning of the story and the lesson he desperately needs to learn to complete his personal journey. (“If he wants revenge, he’s going to end up with forgiveness,” was one writer’s answer to Hale’s question about how the character’s story arc changes.)

And what about other characters in the story? “You can actually do an act structure for all your characters,” Hale said. “Just keep in mind that the overt structure will be the plot of your protagonist.”

(For more about the three (or four) act structure, editor Lou Anders’ discussion, “The bones of a novel,” parts I and II, at this site. For more about SMU’s writing program, see
www.smu.edu/Simmons/CommunityEnrichment/CreativeWriting/. For more about Dallas Mystery Writers and their programs, see http://dallasmysterywriters.com/. Next Monday, Hale follows the steps of the hero’s journey through the story.)

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Upcoming events and opportunities for writers include Tours of Tyler’s writer’s conference and workshop June 28-29. Topics include freelance writing, children’s book, songwriting, humor, and more from speakers who include members of Dallas Mystery Writers. No agents or editors, but at $30 for both days, the price is hard to beat. For information see http://toursoftyler.com/writers_conference_workshop/.

Houston Writers Guild is accepting submissions for its “Tides of Possibility” fantasy anthology through August 1. Multiple submissions welcome. For details, see the June 10, 2014 post at http://houstonwritersguild.org/newsletters.

This one’s really specialized, but the Literature + Medicine Conference in Dallas is looking for poems, short stories and essays from medical professionals about their experiences. Deadline is October 1. See http://texashealth.org/litmed.