Showing posts with label How to Write a Mystery. Show all posts
Showing posts with label How to Write a Mystery. Show all posts

Wednesday, February 15, 2023

Thriller reviews: two whodunnits and a how-to-do-it

When making New Year's resolutions, always pick those you will love keeping. For lovers of crime, mystery, suspense and thriller writing in particular, here a a few short reviews of books that I hope will whet your reading appetite.

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How to Write a Mystery: A Handbook from Mystery Writers of America, edited by Lee Child with Laurie R. King

How to Write a Mystery is a handbook, not a formulaic cookbook. It opens with a section entitled "The Rules and Genres," then cheekily discusses ways to subvert them. Genre rules, it seems, are far from laws of nature. They're subject to being stretched, merged, sometimes even outdated and best forgotten, as in Rule #5 from the 1929 list by British author Ronald Knox: "No Chinaman must figure in the story."

What? Park your racial slurs far, far away (unless, as a modern Black author states, they're necessary). Crime/mystery/suspense/thrillers are open to all!

There are, however, gentle suggestions for writing the likes of stories about amateur sleuths, police procedurals, noir, historicals, medical and spy thrillers, as well as the inevitable crossed-genre stories. As well as discussions of how to write mysteries for children and teen, graphic novels, and short stories. And though the writing that most often come mind are fiction, true crime stories -- "nothing but the facts" also claim their due.

No discussion of writing can neglect the who/what/where/when/why and how of stories, which are also addressed in How to Write a Mystery. As are the less obvious issues of humorous crime fiction. Or writing in partnership, or even how to write (and learn from) reviews. With suggestions from dozens of modern authors, there's something for anyone writing -- or reading -- in the c/m/s/t realm. Even something like the books whose reviews follow.

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Razorblade Tears, by S.A. Cosby

Cops knocking at the door are never a good sign. But for Ike "Riot" Randolph, their news is far worse than he fears. It's not an inquiry into his own past crime, but the death of his son, murdered execution style along with his white husband. Ike and his son had parted on bad terms, Isiah determined not to become a man of violence like his father. Now Ike's tears for all that his son's loss means -- to himself, his wife, and the daughter his son and son-in-law left behind, feel like razorblades slicing his face.

Ike is not surprised when the cops who brought word of Isiah's death tell him the case is inactive, that nobody wants to talk to them about it. Why would anybody in rural Virginia care about the death of a black man, of a pair of gay men? Nobody except Ike and to his surprise, the white father of Isiah's husband. 

Ike reluctantly agrees to Buddy Lee Jenkin's request for help solving the murders of their sons. He doesn't trust Buddy Lee, an ex-con like himself. But no one else is willing to bring their sons' killers to justice. Or to consider that it might have been Isiah's work as an investigative reporter, not his sexuality, that led to his death. But the trail leads far deeper, into far more dangerous territory than even "Riot" Randolph could have expected.

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From rural Southerners to wealthy, urban Northerners, here's something completely different -- a high-society suspense mystery by Lynn and Valerie Constantine, writing as Liv Constantine.

The Stranger in the Mirror, by Liv Constantine

It should have been the happiest occasion in Addison Hope's life -- her engagement to the love of her life. But how can she be sure this handsome, wealthy man truly is her only love? She can't remember anything about her life more than two years in the past, when a truck driver found her bleeding beside the highway.

And although Addison's fiancĂ© insists nothing in her past matters because he knows what a kind and caring person she is, his mother's suspicions have her digging into Addison's antecedents. 

Meanwhile, not
far away, a prominent doctor assures his small daughter that the mother who disappeared two years ago -- a mother who bears an uncanny resemblance to Addison -- will return one day. Could the kind, caring, Addison really have deserted her child and loving husband? Just when readers think they've found the connection, the Constantine sisters upend everything. And the twist is more terrifying than Addison -- or the readers -- could have imagined.

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Next: Do literary agents really want writers to do their work for them? What I learned during the pandemic.


Monday, January 30, 2023

Reverse engineering a mystery -- in the end is the beginning

 Some writers are plotters, some are seat-of-the-pantsers. But if we're going to write whodunnits, one thing we must know from the beginning is -- who done it. So, at last fall's DFW Writers Conference, I marked the Reverse-Outline Your Way to an Unputdownable Mystery class by Jessica S. Olson as a must-attend.

Determined to expand her writing chops, Olson told us she had typed "how to write a mystery" into Google, only to find its answers completely unhelpful. She realized she'd have to solve the mystery of mystery writing on her own.

Like a good sleuth, she performed interrogations -- this time, of herself.

Q. What were the things she loved about mysteries?

A. Sleuths! And a puzzle to be solved. And of course, a good villain, aka, perpetrator. And ticking time bombs. And clues. And the opposite of clues -- red herrings. And of course, how to put them all together. All leading to The Big Reveal, which had to be big enough to justify the rest.

So, Olson started with the crime. Not with the weather, not even the world building. In effect, start with The Big Reveal -- but for now keep that a secret from everyone but yourself at this point, dear writer. Know the ending before writing the beginning. This means knowing:

  • What happened?
  • Who was the victim?
  • The perpetrator?
  • Why did the crime happen?
  • Where, how and what clues were left behind?
  • And of course -- who's the main character (sleuth)?
In most mysteries written for adult and even teen audiences, the happening will be a murder. But it can also be a theft, a disappearance/kidnapping, an act of espionage, assault, extortion, and more. 

The volume How to Write A Mystery: A Handbook from Mystery Writers of America, also has discussions of possible nonviolent "crimes" or puzzles that can propel mysteries for younger readers. However, Olson notes that the happening, whatever it is, must involve something compelling enough to be worth investigation, and for teens and older readers, must involve enough components to build a novel-length plot.

The victim(s) must also be compelling in their own right. If a mystery contains multiple victims, they need to be connected but also may point to multiple suspects.

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The writer will probably also have an idea of the main character's identity -- amateur or professional -- how they became entangled in the crime and why it's meaningful to them. Even if the sleuth is a professional, it's not enough that they've been hired to do a job (if a private investigator) or assigned to a case (if law enforcement personnel). And if the main character is an amateur sleuth, the mystery must be something that can only be solved by that person.

Then there's the perpetrator. Who are they and why did they do the crime? This person needs to be as fully developed as the main character, avoiding cliches as much as possible. Preferably, the perpetrator will be stronger, smarter, and better than the main character, who will have to strain every resource of brain -- and possibly brawn -- they possess to outwit the criminal.

Knowing what happened, who did it, and to whom, are essential to what Olson termed "the backwards treasure hunt" that that entails compiling lists of:
  • Clues
  • Red herrings (misdirections) and dead ends
  • People the main character can suspect
  • People the readers can suspect (these last two don't necessarily overlap)
Clues must be in places the main character can access -- although not necessarily easy of access; and plausible but not necessarily obvious. They should be found in a variety of locations and include details of where and how the crime was discovered and the testimony of witnesses (who also may not be easy of access).

With these details in mind, the writer can form a rough idea -- not yet set in stone -- of what the actual plot will entail. And deal with the fun parts of building the world of the story and the characters of both sleuth and villain. Not to mention laying out that Big Reveal that will make all the work worthwhile.

I'm not going to tell you everything Olson covered in her class. For that, see her
site
(www.jessicasolson.com) for questions, insider information, and the location of her next conference. But I will leave with her final admonition: "Read as many mysteries as you can. Find out what worked in those you love, or if less than loved, what went wrong." 

In other words, we must be our own sleuths.

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Next up: Do you know you may have an author's page you never set up? I didn't -- until I got hit over the head with it!