Showing posts with label writing conventions. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing conventions. Show all posts

Monday, July 13, 2020

Thrillerfest bites: plotting, villains, research & more


Here I am, about to wrap up my first-ever Thrillerfest, which I could only afford because like so many events this year it was online. My ticket entitled me to videos of 58 internationally known thriller writers who would normally have gathered for their annual conference in New York. I’ve watched fewer than a dozen because I can’t sit still more than an hour or two before my dogs demand to be let out (and back into the fortunately air-conditioned house because Texas is damned hot in July). Still, it seemed unfair to make readers wait until I’ve seen everything – which will be online until next year – before sharing, including that there’s more than one way, maybe more than a dozen, to become a famous author in my favorite genre.

To plot or not

Most of those I’ve seen interviewed raised their hands as devotees of outlines. A few, not surprisingly to those who’ve read their books, did not. And then there was the author who outlined after the fact and had a good reason for it.

l-r, Ryan Steck & C. J. Box
“I start out with a couple of topics, items of interest to me,” said writer of the Joe Pickett Wyoming game warden series, C.J. Box, “then usually an idea or two from the wider world.” At this point, although some of his books are unplanned, Box typically begins an outline, which can run up to 40 pages, and which after 20 Joe Pickett books can be helpful in keeping track of characters and events.

“Does anything ever blow up the outline,” interviewer Ryan Steck asked. “Totally!” Box said. “Sometimes something happen in the middle. Sometimes it’s just throwing a curve.”

“I create a lot of outlines,” said Dan Brown, author of the Da Vinci Code among other thrillers featuring the professorial Robert Langdon. “I usually write the last scene first so that I know where I’m going – though it will probably change.”

“I like to set the story evolve organically,” Sandra Brown said. “The first draft is the rough one. The next draft is the crafting one, making sure I’ve milked everything I can out of every scene.”

Diana Gabaldon also famously writes outline-free, having started her first book, Outlander, with a single image – “a man in a kilt” – from an episode of Doctor Who set in 18th century Scotland. After writing for about three days, she “came upon an Englishwoman (character) who wouldn’t shut up,” and incorporated the story’s time travel element (again, probably thanks to the good Doctor).

On the other hand, for lawyer turned author John Grisham. “Everything starts with a plot. . . I don’t think I’ve started with a character. I know the last scene before I write the first page.”

“I always have a grand plan,” thriller/historical writer Ken Follett said. His special take on plotting/outlining is – making lists. “I do that all the time. It’s great because it gives me a perspective I wouldn’t have if I just wrote sentence by sentence.”

And then there’s the unique take of Kathy Reichs, author of the Temperance Brennan “Bones” series for adults as well as the Virals young adult series co-written with her son Brendan Reichs. “I don’t do a lot of outlines,” Reichs said, “(but) my son is a fanatic about it! I outline maybe six to seven chapters and then write the rest.” Her twist is to outline retroactively, to remember where to find something she wrote earlier. “So, I end up with an outline, even I didn’t start with one.”

Oddball characters

C. J. Box’s first agent (in New York) told him he couldn’t sell his book because “who wants to read about a game warden in some place nobody’s ever heard of?” Box deliberately set out to make Pickett “a state employee, a Dudley Do-right, who doesn’t make much money and dotes on his wife and family. Wouldn’t that be unusual? . . .I’m proud to say 51 percent of my readers are women. I think it’s the family relationships between Joe’s wife and daughters.”

If a game warden seems like a strange protagonist for a thriller, how about a college professor like Dan Brown’s Robert Langdon? In Brown’s case, it was a case of writing what he knew, he said. Having grown up in an academic environment, why not have an art history professor as the hero – although he admits Langdon’s specialty of “symbology” is completely fictional.

Villains

“It’s all about point of view,” Box said. “Once we know what drives (villains), even it’s despicable reasons, readers can understand them.”

The attraction of villains, for Dan Brown is, “the ambiguity, that is, a villain who does the wrong things for the right reasons. . . (and) finding an argument I can argue from both sides.”

What is it about bad characters that readers like, interviewer Jeff Ayers asked Grisham. “Most lawyers are good, hardworking people who make much money,” he replied. “Nobody wants to read about that!”

Follett’s take on a great villain is, “You have to hate him but (not) in the way you do COVID-19. He has to be a person. He must be a bully but he must have people around him. I don’t think it has to depend on violence. We can hate him for just being nasty.”

Series vs. standalone books

“Standalones are the harder to write,” Box said, although after 20 Joe Pickett books, he finds himself walking “a fine line between introducing (backstory) to new readers without boring longtime readers. I try to sum it up in a sentence or two for new readers so they don’t fee lost.”

Grisham, on the other hand, prefers standalones. “Once I’ve finished a book, I’m done. You can’t do that with a series.” Although, he’ll never say never, having written a middle-grade thriller series, Theodore Boone: Kid Lawyer, and his Camino Island mystery is threatening to morph into a series with its follow-up, Camino Winds.

Author branding vs. genre jumping

“I had written 40 series romances before I wrote my first crossover (into suspense),” Sandra Brown said. “It was freeing but terrifying. My publisher said, ‘Do we sell you as a romance writer or a suspense writer? You’re sending mixed signals.’”

“After ten legal thrillers, I asked myself about writing other types of books, Grisham said. “(My mystery) Camino Winds, for instance doesn’t have a single lawyer!”

Follett’s take on switching from his original, trademark thrillers to historical novels with the crossover historical fiction of The Pillars of the Earth, is there was a common thread tying all of them together. “Two things that appeal to me enormously are writing about people in love and people in danger. So long as I have those very basic human (issues) there was a continuity between my books.”

Research

“I always go (to sites),” Box said, “if I’m going to someplace other than the mythical Saddlestring, Wyoming,” which is Joe Pickett’s home. “I put on my old reporter hat.” Visits to settings can turn up unexpected insights – such as how much wind turbines can sway -- and conduct interviews. “Even though there might be some hesitancy at first, everybody I’ve talked to has been incredibly forthcoming – sometimes more than I anticipate. Just like cops, people love to talk about their professions.”

“I read a lot and go to locations,” said Dan Brown, for whom location is character. “I also interview a lot of people, but before I can talk to specialists, I have to know something.”

Gabaldon had, again famously, ever been to Scotland before selling her first novel, which made enough money to finance a trip to the country for her and her husband (who, not incidentally, is tall and redhaired like her book’s hero). “I don’t do any (research) before I start,” Gabaldon said, “because the research is concurrent with the writing. I just trip over stuff as I go along.” She reads primarily for “atmosphere,” she said, while using the Internet for particulars.

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That’s all for now but with a year until the 2021 Thrillerfest to finish watching all the author interviews, I’m sure to be posting more advice here from time to time. Stay tuned!

Thursday, January 12, 2017

Writing contests – there's more here than book reviews

This site isn’t all about reviews. Sometimes it’s about competitions, like a chance to win a free writing residency (and more!) from the DFW Writers Workshop. Or can you be tempted by a chance to have bestselling author James Patterson pick you from among his writing students to co-author one of his books? How about a critique (and chance to pitch to) a literary agent in your field? Or, if you’re a medical professional with a yen to write, check out an opportunity just for you.

January 15: Deadline for the Writers League of Texas 2017 manuscript contest is this coming Sunday, January 15. This is a chance to get your manuscript (in any of several genres) before the eyes of writing professionals. Winners in each category will meet individually with the literary agent who was the final judge in their category. No finished manuscript required, only the first approximately 10 pages plus a synopsis. Plus, you don’t need to live in Texas to qualify.
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Fees are $55 for WLT members, $65 for nonmembers. All contestants, winners or not, will receive written feedback. Or plunk members can plunk down $25 ($35 for nonmembers) to enter and forego the written feedback. (Although why wouldn’t you want feedback?)
See the site for details and formatting requirements.
February 1 – March 1: James Patterson’s 22-lesson writing starts with how to get started and covers outlines, plotting, characters, dialogue and more. Includes class workbooks and a chance to submit drafts for feedback from fellow students (and maybe from Patterson himself.) Cost: $90. See the Master Class site for class details and information on how to enter the contest to be his next co-author.


March 10:  The annual Literature + Medicine conference, previously hosted by Texas Health Presbyterian Hospital Dallas, is moving to the campus of Southern Methodist University for this year’s conference, April 1. In addition to some wonderful speakers (last year’s special guest was Dr. Abraham Verghese, author of Cutting for Stone, among other works), the conference includes a creative writing contest. Sorry, this is only for health care professionals, but it’s a chance to exercise your skill at essays, poems and short stories about your experience in medicine. Check the Literature + Medicine site for details.

March 22: Now, for those who’ve already written the first chapter of their novels for the Writers League contest, (who are hard at work on the same), get more bang from your work by entering the first-ever writing residence contest from the DFW Writers Workshop. This is the organization that hosts an annual literary conference (this year, May 6-7). Now they’re giving us a chance to polish our work, not to mention free or reduced price admission to the DFWWW conference.

Grand prize winner gets free admission to the conference (which includes a 10-minute pitch session with an agent or editor), admission to VIP events not open to general conference attendees, two weeks’ room and board at the conference hotel, airfare to Dallas-Fort Worth from anywhere in the continental United States, manuscript critique and mentorship by a published author.

Second and third place winners receive free admission to the conference. Fourth and fifth place winners receive half-price admission.

Submit the first chapter (up to 5,000 words) of a book-length work in any prose genre along with an outline or synopsis demonstrating your vision and ability to complete the project. Fee per entry: $50. See the DFW Writers Workshop site for details. 

Tuesday, March 24, 2015

Wordcraft -- So you want me to make you a writer?

Don’t ask Clay Reynolds to go all mealy-mouthed about the writing business. “A lot of what I have to say is not going to be very positive,” he told his audience at this month’s meeting of the Writers’ Guild of Texas. “I’ve been doing this for some time and the last thing I would want to do is mislead anybody just starting out.”

When he says “doing this for some time,” he’s not joking. He’s been writing (and teaching writing, and talking about writing, and writing about writing) for more than 30 years. He’s a professor of creative writing at the University of Texas at Dallas (where he’s Dr. R. Clay Reynolds), a writer with nearly a thousand publications to his credit, including award-winning novels and short stories. In addition, he consults with writers, although I’d recommend reading his “so you want me to make you a writer” page at
www.clayreynolds.info before daring to approach him.

There are, he told his audience, six basic avenues for publishing: commercial publishing in the United States, which he referred to as New York publishing “although a lot of it is no longer in New York”; commercial publishing outside the U.S.; university press/small press publishing; print on demand (POD) and e-publishing houses; online publishing; and self-publishing.

Although Reynolds stated that only about 20 percent of current books are published by the large houses, he concentrated on them because of the advantages they provide to authors. “They actually pay for books, they pay before a book is published, and their books are generally reviewed somewhere.” In addition, large publishers generally keep books in print about 12 months and are able to keep them on shelves in bookstores about eight to 12 months. Similar benefits apply to books published by large European publishing houses, but these are not generally reviewed in U.S. media.

Unfortunately, those big publishing outlets are becoming fewer. When he began writing fiction, there were 60 major U.S. publishing houses. Now there are six, and four of those are actually owned by non-U.S. corporations. University presses and non-university small presses are also dwindling. (Three large presses that describe themselves as university presses¾ Oxford, Harvard, and Cambridge¾ Reynolds explained, are now affiliated with the big six publishers.) Outside of the large publishing houses, marketing and publicity for books depends almost entirely on the author. And even within the big six, “author development, the carrying of marginal writers, disappeared by the end of the 1980’s” when big bookstores started marketing book like groceries.” From what he sees, this state of affairs is only going to continue.

Which raises the question: “Why do you want to do this? If you’re doing it for the money or fame, you’re in the wrong business.”

In case he hadn’t scared everybody away yet (although all of us hearing Reynolds speak had gotten very, very quiet), he went on to talk about what to do with any money an author might earn. “Everybody needs an agent. Without an agent, your chance of receiving commercial publication is nil. Agents effectively are clearing houses.”

The good part? “You don’t have to pay an agent until the book sells. Honest agents are not hard to find,” with listing in such publications as Literary Market Place,
www.literarymarketplace.com/. Book fairs and conventions are also good places to meet agents, he noted. (For more about upcoming Texas writing conventions with agents in attendance, see www.writersleague.org and http://dfwcon.org/.)

“Writing’s a funny business,” Reynolds mused. “You can write the best book in the world and nobody will buy it. You can write the worst book and it may become a best seller. Write from the heart and write honestly. Don’t pull punches. Don’t plan to give me a shock, don’t plan to make me laugh, don’t plan to make me cry¼ and you just might do it.”