Showing posts with label Pulp Empire. Show all posts
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Friday, November 10, 2017

In search of lost friends – a story of barbarous adventure

As I promised a couple of months ago, I will occasionally share some of my older shorter stories. “The Gates of Shaizar” is an adventure story first published in 2010 in Pulp Empire, vol. 2, which is now out of print. It was republished in 2012 at the ezine Abandoned Towers, which has also now disappeared. I recently found two copies of Pulp Empire, vol. 2, on Amazon for $56 each, but you can read a story from that volume here, for free!

Oh, a few last words before the story: Shaizar is (or was) a real place, an ancient Syrian town that became a fortress in the medieval period before being abandoned after repeated devastation by earthquakes. The illustration for this post is taken from a photograph of the ruins which serves as a frontispiece to Philip K. Hitti's 1929 translation of a memoir of the medieval period.

Shaizar in ruins
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THE GATES OF SHAIZAR

When the order to halt came, al-Mastoub reined in his bay before the guards at the eastern gate of Shaizar. Behind him, the queue of merchants with ox carts and camels, the woodcutters leading laden donkeys; the governor’s concubines in curtained palanquins; the flocks of bleating sheep and goats; the slaves, pilgrims, and riff-raff of the province backed up outside the iron-studded eastern gate of the city.

The gaze of the guards’ lieutenant traveled over al-Mastoub’s cast-off clothing, the tall warhorse, the sword, pulled although the lieutenant couldn’t know, from the Varangian Leofric’s stiffening hand. A good horse and weapons, but only a leather cap and quilted jerkin for armor. Al-Mastoub could see the lieutenant’s suspicions reflected on the man’s face.

“Sir,” al-Mastoub said, “I have a passport from the magistrate Haroun ibn Ibrahim of al-Shara.” He held the now-tattered safe conduct he’d forged before his chest, like a shield. And he prayed silently, as he had at every checkpoint, that the man wouldn’t know Haroun’s signature.

The lieutenant ran a hand over his beard. The document’s elaborate calligraphy, al-Mastoub knew, was almost indecipherable. He’d added every flourish possible to dissuade anyone he encountered from giving more than a cursory glance at his credentials. But as a corner of al-Mastoub’s mouth twitched, the lieutenant’s hand clamped on the passport.

“No one enters until I’ve examined this man’s papers. Thoroughly.”

The guards stationed themselves before the crowd shoving to enter the opened gate. The sun rose high over the town’s walls in the late summer sky. The crowd behind al-Mastoub grew more clamorous as the lieutenant read the passport, muttering each word aloud.

Al-Mastoub loosened the fidgeting bay’s reins. He fumbled for the pouch under his shirt that held his small horde of treasure -– the papers of his manumission, Leofric’s medusa-headed ring, the last handful of stolen dinars.

The lieutenant’s eye caught the movement. “You!  Keep your hands in sight.”

“It’s a hot day, sir. Perhaps you’d like something to slake your thirst?”

“In sight!”

Al-Mastoub shrugged. If the passport failed, at least he had the sword. He wished he had Haroun’s practical scimitar. Leofric’s sword was almost too long for him to wield one-handed. But he hadn’t dared steal another weapon. Roaming through Syria with a forged passport was enough to get him beheaded without having Haroun on his trail.

Itinerant jugglers, beggars, and pickpockets plied their trades among the crowd. Sellers of wine, fruit juice and sweetmeats counted themselves blessed.

“I’ve got eight for the head,” a singsong voice chanted just beyond the gates. “Do I hear any more?”

“Put me in for the head.” One of the guards pulled a copper dirham out of his sash.

“A small bet at short odds,” the bookmaker sneered. “You might do better to wager on nose and ears.”

“I’m for nose and ears,” another man shouted.

“Aren’t you going to give odds which gate he hangs at?” A man with eyebrows that met across his forehead pushed as close as the troopers would allow. Al-Mastoub cursed him under his breath.

“It would just be taking your money,” the bookmaker said. “Whatever part of him the lieutenant decides to hack off will hang here on the front gate for all to see.”

“I want to place a bet,” al-Mastoub said.

The bookmaker stared. “Show me your money.”

Again, al-Mastoub eased a hand under his shirt.

“In plain view!” the lieutenant said.

Al-Mastoub withdrew his hand.

“No money, no bet,” the bookmaker said.

“Silence!” The lieutenant looked up at last. “This mentions two companions,” he said.

“They were taken prisoner.” Al-Mastoub shifted his damp hands from the saddlebow. “I’m here to ransom them.”

The lieutenant flung the passport at him in disgust. “Then do so. And leave quickly.”

Al-Mastoub joined the travelers surging toward the marketplace. He scanned the merchandise.  At the point in the line where Jehan and Robert had been chained, there now stood only a gawky girl with big feet. There was no sign of either of the captured soldiers. No Jehan, no Robert.

The old slave trader, Abu al-Darda, hailed him, walking around al-Mastoub’s tall bay. “Ain’t you come up in the world since the last time we met? If I knew you was this good a horse thief, I’d have charged that judge more for you.”

“I had two friends in this caravan.  I’m able to redeem them now. Or if you remember where you sold them. . .” Al-Mastoub pulled a gold piece out of his pouch and flipped it.

Abu al-Darda moved closer. Al-Mastoub folded his fist around the coin.

Wednesday, December 21, 2011

Wordcraft -- Resolution 3: Get out there!

Okay, you’ve written a story. Maybe several stories. And you think you’re ready to publish. Well, here’s my experience. I tried writing a novel (actually, a few novels), sent them to agents and got -- nothing. In those pre-online days, it seemed as if literary agents could have made a living from re-selling the stamps off my SASE’s.

So when a friend from a university novel writing course confessed she’s writing short stories now and asked whether I’d heard of Glimmer Train, I told her what I’m telling you. I have heard of the big contests; I’ve entered them; and I’m not trying to discourage anyone from going out for them.

But big publications and big contests receive many more stories than they can handle. Most entries get a form rejection at best or nothing at. In the meantime, smaller publications, less prestigious sites, and sites that don’t pay as much may be eager for your stories, or at least willing to provide valuable feedback.

Finding them isn’t as hard as you may think. By following resolution #1, you know what kinds of stories you write, that is, what genres you do best. Your writing group from resolution #2 has helped you work through a lot of basic craft issues. But ultimately, the only person who can tell whether your stories are publishable is a publisher.

A lot of you link to Duotrope’s Digest. Good for you. Duotrope can also search for the most accessible sites in given genres. I ran such a search, then researched the results again, looking for sites with credibility, the ones I’d be proud to have my work seen at.

I found The Lorelei Signal. It looked good. It showcased stories I respected. And its guiding light, Carol Hightshoe, published my first story, “Gift Cards of an Ex-Goddess.” It’s still one of my favorite publications.  The next reading period begins January 15, at
http://www.loreleisignal.com/

Other small publishers have printed my stories, or even when they haven’t, they’ve made comments that enabled me to sell stories elsewhere. Stories such as “Shaman,” (rejected by Heroic Fantasy Quarterly but published by Short-story.me) ; or “The Gates of Shaizar,” (rejected for a Ricasso Press anthology but since accepted by both Pulp Empire and Abandoned Towers).

Just don’t aim too low. Sites that will accept everything don’t give you credibility. And sites you’re embarrassed to be seen at -- not worth it.

(Next Wednesday -- Resolution number 4: pay back by paying forward.)