Showing posts with label Wordfest. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Wordfest. Show all posts

Saturday, March 12, 2022

Gems from pandemic's virtual literary events

 I spent the past two-plus years stuffing myself with more virtual literary conferences and classes than I could have afforded to attend in person. And even as we cheer the pandemic's apparent wind-down, it's hard to deny that the virtual world has its benefits. I written several posts about details of these virtual events, but there are so many gems that couldn't find a place. Until now!

  • Hacks to keep us writing: Tie a desired action with a habitual one. . . 'when I pour a cup of coffee, I will spend 10 minutes (doing desired action).' -- Kathy Ver Eeke, Pitch to Published virtual class
  • On creating characters: A character sketch is an outline that asks and answers questions about your main characters. Don't skip this step! You'll know how your character will behave and react in any situation. . . Look at the famous people who have the personality types that most interest you. -- Shayla Raquel, WORDfest virtual conference, 2020
  • On those 'crappy' first drafts: If you write with somebody looking over your shoulder, you're screwed to begin with. I write like everybody I know is dead. -- Joe R. Lansdale, Writers League of Texas virtual conference, 2021
  • Still more 'crappy': I encourage young writers to write without editing. -- Varian Johnson, Writers League of Texas virtual conference, 2021
  • Last of the crappies (for now!): Give yourself permission to write badly! -- Shayla Raquel, Writers Guild of Texas online video
  • On reading when you're a writer: It can be hard to read a book without picking it apart -- or wishing I'd written it myself! -- Jeffrey Kraatz, Writers League of Texas virtual conference, 2021
  • More reading as a writer: You never know where your next inspiration will come from. -- Kathleen Kent, Writers League of Texas virtual conference, 2021
  • On knowing your audience: It's really hard to write books without meeting the people who read them. -- Jeff Kinney, North Texas Teen Book Festival, 2021
  • On planning a book: The more books you write, the more you need to plan. Or it's all going to end up sounding like the same book. . . You can veer away from the recipe once you know what the recipe is. -- Michelle Stimpson, WORDfest virtual conference, 2020   
  • On getting 'unstuck': If you're feeling stuck, go back to your outline. If you didn't outline, go back and do so! -- Shayla Raquel, Writers Guild of Texas online video
  • 'Showing' vs. 'telling': Put the character in situation in which they interact in ways you want to show. 'In the head' is telling. It's the action that's 'showing.': Dan Crissman, Pitch to Published virtual writing group
  • On not sweating the small stuff: Clothing descriptions don't need to happen unless it's important to the story. We can assume (the characters) are wearing clothes. -- Robert Dugoni, Thrillerfest virtual conference, 2021
  • On literary agents: I became an agent because I was in law school but didn't want to be a lawyer! -- Kirby Kim, Writers League of Texas virtual conference, 2021
  • How to research agents: Get two bowls with 50 marbles in one. Take a marble from the first bowl and put it in the second bowl for each agent researched. Caution -- do not substitute candies for marbles in this exercise.
    :  -- Kathy Ver Eeke, Pitch to Published virtual writing group
  • I'll end with this spit in the eye of the pandemic: During COVID-19, I had to find a place to write where it was outdoors but safe -- I went to the cemetery. -- Jeff Kinney, North Texas Teen Book Festival, 2021
image by Kaitlyn Millet from Pixabay
There you have it. Useful tips or at least some that may make us smile. I'm happy to say that some of these events have or plan to go live in 2020. The North Texas Teen Book Festival went live earlier this month, and Writers League of Texas and Thrillerfest are full steam ahead with plans for in-person conferences. The Writers Guild of Texas is still operating virtually out of its Facebook page but sadly, WORDfest, an event of the Writers Organizations 'Round Dallas has disappeared from sight. Keep checking back here for updates. And keep writing!
        

Sunday, December 27, 2020

Countdown of readers’ favs of 2020 – day 2

 The countdown of readers’ favorite posts of 2020 continues, with numbers seven and eight:

Last look at WORDfest – the on to virtual future!

Writers—need a break from that “locked in” feeling? From old familiar faces? From long term commitments? I don’t have a cure for the pandemic, only for a change of writing pace, from long form to short form, with hints from master short story writer William Ledbetter

A Nebula Award-winning author of dozens of speculative fiction short stories and articles, Ledbetter discussed his guidelines for “Writing and Marketing Short Fiction” at this year’s virtual version of North Texas And if it sounds as if she’s talking only to authors planning to self-publish, she’s not. It’s even possible to relaunch a previously published book. And if by “platform” you think she means being on every possible social media outlet, she’s not. “Find two you love, including your blog. . . The way you (build platform) is by being authentic, (posting) about things that make me fall in love with you. You don’t have to sell your book.”

Writers do, however, “need to have goals so you can achieve them,” Raquel insisted, because you’ll be launching on that “complex beast” Amazon. “Your book launch depends on making this animal work for you, not against you.”

Make it work by researching categories, prices, and endorsers.     

Think of Amazon categories as genres, Raquel told her audience. Pick the most relevant ones, but rather than choosing “science fiction and fantasy,” which is too broad, get more specific with categories such as “technothriller.” Then research the competition. “It will be hard to outsell authors in categories they dominate,” and launching writers will strive to find categories in which their books have a chance to become bestsellers.

And about pricing—“it’s an art, not a science.” Check the most common prices for ebooks in the chosen category, remembering that prices can always be changed. Raquel’s suggestions are to launch at 99 cents the first week. “You want it to be a no-brainer for someone to buy that book.” Later pricing can go up to $2.99 to $3.99 for ebooks and as much as $12.99-$19.99 for paperbacks, depending on genre. (Note: for KDP, authors must change their royalty setting to be able to sell at 99 cents.)

To find endorsers, Raquel recommends cultivating book bloggers, as well as checking out book promotion sites, whose prices can vary from free to “very expensive.” Both tasks should be done prior to launch. Although she suggested several, writers may want to check out book bloggers and promotional sites as well as contests with possible prizes at the all-purpose Reedsy site. 

***

Ready for more reader favs? Here’s #7:

Recycling floods of words into multiple venues

Is anyone else feeling jealous at the sight of all the creative stuff our friends are making from unlikely sources during the pandemic? You know who I’m talking about. The ones who craft amazing whatzits from leftover yarn or cook from-scratch restaurant-worthy entrees out of stuff found in the back of their pantries, even post pictures of themselves impersonating famous paintings. 

Well, writers, here’s our turn at creative recycling. With crafts like mining our yet-to-be-published novels for short stories – 1,000 words are easier and quicker to sell than 100,000. Or writing fanfic from our own fiction by giving a minor character an expanded role, reimagining a scene from a different point of view, or taking that sea of back story we can’t quite find room for in the big book and giving it a story of its own. 

This isn’t a new idea for me, but it got new life recently while I was, as I posted last month, refurbishing some of my previously published short stories for Wattpad. When I dropped some of them in my critique group’s Dropbox, one sharp-eyed critique partner noticed that one employed an episode from a novel the group had recently critiqued. 

Why, she asked, would I turn a novel into a short story? 

The short answer was so that I could make a separate sale of the short story, which didn’t exactly replicate the novel chapter it was based on. And has, in fact, been sold twice, while the novel still languishes. I didn’t mention that a second short story (which has also sold twice) was the backstory of another character who ended up in that same novel

Or that still another unsold novel has generated other multi-published short stories.

Still, I had said enough to whet her interest. Where, she, a veteran of long form writing, asked, do you sell short stories?

The answer to that proved too lengthy for a Facebook post, so I’m expanding it here. I’ll also delve into the inspirational benefits to be gleaned from writing short stories that make us want to try our hands at longer works with those characters or settings.

First, let me whet the appetites of you, dear readers, with suggestions for where to sell those story whatzits I see churning in your brains.

When I was writing a lot more short stories than I currently am, my bible for publication venues was Duotrope’s Digest, with its listing of thousands of active markets for fiction, nonfiction, and poetry. (It’s since added visual arts venues and literary agents to its mix.) In addition to listing markets and their contact information, Duotrope adds interviews with editors, word counts, numbers of acceptances, approximate response time, and your own personal spreadsheet of submissions.

Is there a downside to all this bounty? Yes, of sorts. Since my initial writing days, Duotrope has added a subscription fee. Still, at $5 per month or $50 for 12 months (each with a beginning free trial) it’s still a good deal. In fact, although I dropped my subscription when I began writing more long form, I’m tempted to return.

However, for those who want to dabble in the publication waters, there are free options. One is The Submission Grinder. I’ve tried it and found it does almost everything Duotrope does, although as yet only for fiction and poetry, without charge.

I’ve also used another not-for-pay source of primarily genre publishing markets, Ralan.com.

Other free sources for short stories as well as longer works include the blog Publishing . . . And Other Forms of Insanity, which also has agent listings; New Pages; and Reedsy.

Still, the possibility of getting money from some of those words we’ve devoted so much time to isn’t the only reason for the mix-and-match use of short stories and novels. There’s also the possibility of faster gratification – publication in weeks instead of years. Plus, short story publications don’t require literary agents as gatekeepers. And most of them don’t require any more in the way of a query letter than the bare facts of the stories title, genre, and word count, and the writer’s own contact information.

And short stories on their own are ways to generate ideas for longer fiction. I’ve hatched the germ of at least a couple of novels, as well as valuable backstory for characters, from short stories written for the market or for writing conferences. Shorter forms are great for trying out ideas. An alt-history short (again, multi-published) turned into a more conventional historical. A fantasy story that flopped at a workshop got new life in a different genre.

And for anyone unsure of which point of view to use, short stories are exercises in possibility. After all, it’s only a few thousand words. . . 

Before proceeding, please note that crafting short stories from already-written or in-progress novels isn’t a simple matter of putting a chapter on a chopping block and cutting a few thousand words. Long form and short form writing are separate works of art. We will find ourselves writing new beginnings or endings, eliding middles, even reimagining our characters.

Think of this as you contemplate your friends’ other crafts on Instagram or Facebook. Maybe they ran out of their favorite yarn and had to improvise. Maybe they had only canned spinach for that quiche instead of fresh or frozen and dared not post the first results to Instagram. Practice, revise, rewrite. Don’t be afraid of any un-Instagram worthy writing results but prepare to turn floods of words into marvelous stories!

He only had to tell his audience to skip the synopsis— “it’s a short story!”—to catch the attention of this writer struggling with that most dreaded to-do for book length works. 

Then there was ability to engage with a completely new set of characters for each short story. And of course, the time element. Not that Ledbetter dashes out stories offhand—he sometimes spends as much as two weeks on one—but I mentally compared this to the months, sometimes years, lavished on novel writing. It didn’t hurt either to hear we can skip dealing with agents and submit our short stories directly to publishers.  

(Most agents, in fact, will not represent short story writers, although Ledbetter didn’t rebuff the agent who offered representation after reading his Nebula-winning short story, “The Long Fall Up.” It was an offer that later resulted in Ledbetter’s first novel publication, Level Five.)

Still, some of Ledbetter’s “musts” for short story publication carry over into long form fiction. “First, read the guidelines,” he warned.

“If the story doesn’t follow the guidelines or the writer hasn’t checked the spelling the slush reader and editor will say, ‘this isn’t for us.’ You want your story to be so good that they’ll read all the way to the end. . . Good enough isn’t good enough. Make sure it’s the best story you can possibly write.”

For writing that best story, first pages are critically important. With a short story, within the first two or three pages, you have to supply context. (By context, he means, why should the story begin where it does and why should the reader care.) And, have a great ending! “It’s a good idea to have something at the beginning that ties into the ending. It’s satisfying when a story comes full circle.”

On the other hand, “one of the things (editors) always say is, ‘read our magazine.’ The problem is writers may simply write clones of previously published stories with the serial numbers filed off.”

Write the story you want to write, Ledbetter said, then look for a publication that’s a match for it.

To find those publications, he suggests two major resources,  Duotrope’s Digest and  The Submission Grinder.

“These allow you to track your submissions and also provide information about other markets.” (Duotrope requires a subscription fee of $5/month or $50/year and also has a larger data base than The Submission Grinder, which is free.) 

“You can also search by genre, like if you’re writing a Western or a romance story, as well as providing information on contests and anthologies.” 

And as always, be persistent and patient. Not to mention thick-skinned. There will be rejections. 

***

Also, at WORDfest, it was a relief to hear from book guru Shayla Raquel that virtual book releases can be as satisfying as those in person.

Raquel’s must-haves for that perfect launch:

·       The best book you can possibly write

·       Professionally edited

·       With a professional cover

·       And professional formatting

·       A user-friendly, mobile-friendly website

·       Author platform (social media presence, community of influencers, email list, etc.)

·       At least three months to execute the launch

And if it sounds as if she’s talking only to authors planning to self-publish, she’s not. It’s even possible to relaunch a previously published book. And if by “platform” you think she means being on every possible social media outlet, she’s not. “Find two you love, including your blog. . . The way you (build platform) is by being authentic, (posting) about things that make me fall in love with you. You don’t have to sell your book.”

Writers do, however, “need to have goals so you can achieve them,” Raquel insisted, because you’ll be launching on that “complex beast” Amazon. “Your book launch depends on making this animal work for you, not against you.”

Make it work by researching categories, prices, and endorsers.     

Think of Amazon categories as genres, Raquel told her audience. Pick the most relevant ones, but rather than choosing “science fiction and fantasy,” which is too broad, get more specific with categories such as “technothriller.” Then research the competition. “It will be hard to outsell authors in categories they dominate,” and launching writers will strive to find categories in which their books have a chance to become bestsellers.

Image: Pixabay
And about pricing—“it’s an art, not a science.” Check the most common prices for ebooks in the chosen category, remembering that prices can always be changed. Raquel’s suggestions are to launch at 99 cents the first week. “You want it to be a no-brainer for someone to buy that book.” Later pricing can go up to $2.99 to $3.99 for ebooks and as much as $12.99-$19.99 for paperbacks, depending on genre. (Note: for KDP, authors must change their royalty setting to be able to sell at 99 cents.)

To find endorsers, Raquel recommends cultivating book bloggers, as well as checking out book promotion sites, whose prices can vary from free to “very expensive.” Both tasks should be done prior to launch. Although she suggested several, writers may want to check out book bloggers and promotional sites as well as contests with possible prizes at the all-purpose Reedsy site.

 ***

And here’s readers' fav #7:

Recycling floods of words into multiple venues

Is anyone else feeling jealous at the sight of all the creative stuff our friends are making from unlikely sources during the pandemic? You know who I’m talking about. The ones who craft amazing whatzits from leftover yarn or cook from-scratch restaurant-worthy entrees out of stuff found in the back of their pantries, even post pictures of themselves impersonating famous paintings. 

Well, writers, here’s our turn at creative recycling. With crafts like mining our yet-to-be-published novels for short stories – 1,000 words are easier and quicker to sell than 100,000. Or writing fanfic from our own fiction by giving a minor character an expanded role, reimagining a scene from a different point of view, or taking that sea of back story we can’t quite find room for in the big book and giving it a story of its own. 

This isn’t a new idea for me, but it got new life recently while I was, as I posted last month, refurbishing some of my previously published short stories for Wattpad. When I dropped some of them in my critique group’s Dropbox, one sharp-eyed critique partner noticed that one employed an episode from a novel the group had recently critiqued. 

Why, she asked, would I turn a novel into a short story? 

The short answer was so that I could make a separate sale of the short story, which didn’t exactly replicate the novel chapter it was based on. And has, in fact, been sold twice, while the novel still languishes. I didn’t mention that a second short story (which has also sold twice) was the backstory of another character who ended up in that same novel

Or that still another unsold novel has generated other multi-published short stories.

Still, I had said enough to whet her interest. Where, she, a veteran of long form writing, asked, do you sell short stories?

The answer to that proved too lengthy for a Facebook post, so I’m expanding it here. I’ll also delve into the inspirational benefits to be gleaned from writing short stories that make us want to try our hands at longer works with those characters or settings.

First, let me whet the appetites of you, dear readers, with suggestions for where to sell those story whatzits I see churning in your brains.

When I was writing a lot more short stories than I currently am, my bible for publication venues was Duotrope’s Digest, with its listing of thousands of active markets for fiction, nonfiction, and poetry. (It’s since added visual arts venues and literary agents to its mix.) In addition to listing markets and their contact information, Duotrope adds interviews with editors, word counts, numbers of acceptances, approximate response time, and your own personal spreadsheet of submissions.

Is there a downside to all this bounty? Yes, of sorts. Since my initial writing days, Duotrope has added a subscription fee. Still, at $5 per month or $50 for 12 months (each with a beginning free trial) it’s still a good deal. In fact, although I dropped my subscription when I began writing more long form, I’m tempted to return.

However, for those who want to dabble in the publication waters, there are free options. One is The Submission Grinder. I’ve tried it and found it does almost everything Duotrope does, although as yet only for fiction and poetry, without charge.

I’ve also used another not-for-pay source of primarily genre publishing markets, Ralan.com.

Other free sources for short stories as well as longer works include the blog Publishing . . . And Other Forms of Insanity, which also has agent listings; New Pages; and Reedsy.

Still, the possibility of getting money from some of those words we’ve devoted so much time to isn’t the only reason for the mix-and-match use of short stories and novels. There’s also the possibility of faster gratification – publication in weeks instead of years. Plus, short story publications don’t require literary agents as gatekeepers. And most of them don’t require any more in the way of a query letter than the bare facts of the stories title, genre, and word count, and the writer’s own contact information.

And short stories on their own are ways to generate ideas for longer fiction. I’ve hatched the germ of at least a couple of novels, as well as valuable backstory for characters, from short stories written for the market or for writing conferences. Shorter forms are great for trying out ideas. An alt-history short (again, multi-published) turned into a more conventional historical. A fantasy story that flopped at a workshop got new life in a different genre.

And for anyone unsure of which point of view to use, short stories are exercises in possibility. After all, it’s only a few thousand words. . . 

Before proceeding, please note that crafting short stories from already-written or in-progress novels isn’t a simple matter of putting a chapter on a chopping block and cutting a few thousand words. Long form and short form writing are separate works of art. We will find ourselves writing new beginnings or endings, eliding middles, even reimagining our characters.

Think of this as you contemplate your friends’ other crafts on Instagram or Facebook. Maybe they ran out of their favorite yarn and had to improvise. Maybe they had only canned spinach for that quiche instead of fresh or frozen and dared not post the first results to Instagram. Practice, revise, rewrite. Don’t be afraid of any un-Instagram worthy writing results but prepare to turn floods of words into marvelous stories!

Monday, April 6, 2020

Last look at WORDfest – then on to virtual future!

(Revised to correct #RevPit dates; cancellation of Writefest Houston & DFW Writers Conference)

Writers—need a break from that “locked in” feeling? From old familiar faces? From long term commitments? I don’t have a cure for the pandemic, only for a change of writing pace, from long form to short form, with hints from master short story writer William Ledbetter



A Nebula Award-winning author of dozens of speculative fiction short stories and articles, Ledbetter discussed his guidelines for “Writing and Marketing Short Fiction” at this year’s virtual version of North Texas WORDfest

He only had to tell his audience to skip the synopsis— “it’s a short story!”—to catch the attention of this writer struggling with that most dreaded to-do for book length works. 

Then there was ability to engage with a completely new set of characters for each short story. And of course, the time element. Not that Ledbetter dashes out stories offhand—he sometimes spends as much as two weeks on one—but I mentally compared this to the months, sometimes years, lavished on novel writing. It didn’t hurt either to hear we can skip dealing with agents and submit our short stories directly to publishers.  

(Most agents, in fact, will not represent short story writers, although Ledbetter didn’t rebuff the agent who offered representation after reading his Nebula-winning short story, “The Long Fall Up.” It was an offer that later resulted in Ledbetter’s first novel publication, Level Five.)

Still, some of Ledbetter’s “musts” for short story publication carry over into long form fiction. “First, read the guidelines,” he warned.

“If the story doesn’t follow the guidelines or the writer hasn’t checked the spelling the slush reader and editor will say, ‘this isn’t for us.’ You want your story to be so good that they’ll read all the way to the end. . . Good enough isn’t good enough. Make sure it’s the best story you can possibly write.”

For writing that best story, first pages are critically important. With a short story, within the first two or three pages, you have to supply context. (By context, he means, why should the story begin where it does and why should the reader care.) And, have a great ending! “It’s a good idea to have something at the beginning that ties into the ending. It’s satisfying when a story comes full circle.”

On the other hand, “one of the things (editors) always say is, ‘read our magazine.’ The problem is writers may simply write clones of previously published stories with the serial numbers filed off.”

Write the story you want to write, Ledbetter said, then look for a publication that’s a match for it.

To find those publications, he suggests two major resources,  Duotrope’s Digest and  The Submission Grinder.

“These allow you to track your submissions and also provide information about other markets.” (Duotrope requires a subscription fee of $5/month or $50/year and also has a larger data base than The Submission Grinder, which is free.) 

“You can also search by genre, like if you’re writing a Western or a romance story, as well as providing information on contests and anthologies.” 

And as always, be persistent and patient. Not to mention thick-skinned. There will be rejections. 
The first three professional markets Ledbetter, already a well-established writer, approached for the story that would go on to win the Nebula rejected it. The fourth one, of course, was the charm.

***

In this time of sheltering at home, it was a relief to hear Shayla Raquel’s online emphasis for “Your Best Book Launch Ever.”

Her must-haves for that perfect launch:

·       The best book you can possibly write
·       Professionally edited
·       With a professional cover
·       And professional formatting
·       A user-friendly, mobile-friendly website
·       Author platform (social media presence, community of influencers, email list, etc.)
·       At least three months to execute the launch

Did she say three months? How about planning one year in advance of publication—starting to use that website and platform to post about research, cover reveals, and more!

Shayla Raquel
And if it sounds as if she’s talking only to authors planning to self-publish, she’s not. It’s even possible to relaunch a previously published book. And if by “platform” you think she means being on every possible social media outlet, she’s not. “Find two you love, including your blog. . . The way you (build platform) is by being authentic, (posting) about things that make me fall in love with you. You don’t have to sell your book.”

Writers do, however, “need to have goals so you can achieve them,” Raquel insisted, because you’ll be launching on that “complex beast” Amazon. “Your book launch depends on making this animal work for you, not against you.”

Make it work by researching categories, prices, and endorsers.
     
Think of Amazon categories as genres, Raquel told her audience. Pick the most relevant ones, but rather than choosing “science fiction and fantasy,” which is too broad, get more specific with categories such as “technothriller.” Then research the competition. “It will be hard to outsell authors in categories they dominate,” and launching writers will strive to find categories in which their books have a chance to become bestsellers.

And about pricing—“it’s an art, not a science.” Check the most common prices for ebooks in the chosen category, remembering that prices can always be changed. Raquel’s suggestions are to launch at 99 cents the first week. “You want it to be a no-brainer for someone to buy that book.” Later pricing can go up to $2.99 to $3.99 for ebooks and as much as $12.99-$19.99 for paperbacks, depending on genre. (Note: for KDP, authors must change their royalty setting to be able to sell at 99 cents.)

To find endorsers, Raquel recommends cultivating book bloggers, as well as checking out book promotion sites, whose prices can vary from free to “very expensive.” Both tasks should be done prior to launch. Although she suggested several, writers may want to check out book bloggers and promotional sites as well as contests with possible prizes at the all-purpose Reedsy site.

***
And now, for something else to do while sheltering at home—check out the WRiTE CLUB 2020 Twitter party this coming Thursday, April 9, at #WRiTECLUBDFW. Fifteen slushpile readers (including me) for DL Hammons’ annual readers’ choice contest will tweet about our wish lists before the contest closes April 19. 

And while you’re on Twitter, don’t forget Revise & Resub’s annual #RevPit contest coming up April 18-19. 


***
Sorry but not surprised to report that both Writefest Houston (originally scheduled May 4-10), and DFWCon, (originally scheduled June 12-13) have been cancelled due to the COVID-19 pandemic. Look for it both to return in 20121. Tickets purchased for DFWCon will be applied to the 2021 convention unless otherwise requested. See the site for details or to request refunds.

Sunday, March 29, 2020

Hold ‘em or fold ‘em – genre tropes, genre bending, or both?

Update: The Twitter party for WRiTE CLUB originally scheduled for April 2 has been moved to April 9. Keep writing!

Next up from North Texas WORDfest’s online edition: authors Michelle Stimpson and Amber Helt on how to meet – or bend – the tropes of genre writing. First, however, a word of thanks for all who signed up to be slushpile readers (aka judges) for the 2020 version of DL Hammons readers’ choice contest, WRiTE CLUB. The contest is now accepting submissions from contestants! See DL’s site for details. But hurry – entries are due by April 19!

***

“The human experience is the same all over the globe,” author Michelle Stimpson told the audience for her virtual WORDfest workshop, Don’t Reinvent the Wheel. No matter where we are, when we are, our brains like patterns, Stimpson said. “What do our readers’ brains already like that we can capitalize on?”
Michelle Stimpson

To illustrate her words, she listed such common story themes as:

• Overcoming the monster
• Rags to riches
• The quest
• The voyage and return
• Comedy
• Tragedy
• Rebirth

Writers, she cautioned, must be aware of which trope we’re writing in and what expectations it triggers in the minds of readers. “When you start writing with one of these tropes in mind, you can’t end up in a completely different one” whether causing reader confusion – not to mention rebellion.

Although this is far from meaning that authors should write same old, same old. She’s a “planner” not a “pantser” (in writing jargon) to avoid that trap. “The more books you write the more you need to plan or it’s all going to end up sounding like the same book.”

Neither should the use of archetypes be an excuse for turning characters into one-dimensional figures. (For help determining what character archetypes are, I found Reedsy’s post (https://blog.reedsy.com/12-common-character-archetypes-every-writer-should-already-know/) helpful.

For help with story structure, Stimpson suggested:

Save the Cat, by Blake Snyder
Writing the Breakout Novel, by Donald Maass
• Jami Gold’s multiple beat sheets (available at https://jamigold.com)

Stimpson also suggests studying other books, chapter by chapter. “You can veer from the recipe once you know what the recipe is. Have a good reason for breaking the rule!”

***

Speaking of breaking the rules, here’s Amber Helt’s take from WORDfest on Genre Bending.

When readers see a story they recognize as belonging to a particular genre – that is, a particular subset of fiction with archetypes, tropes and themes that define it, readers have particular expectations.

“When you go against those expectations you make readers pause,” Helt said. “This doesn’t mean you have to be a slave to expectations,” only that authors must persuade readers to accept them. And they can be willing to do this because, even though “we recognize the patterns, what we want in a book is to be surprised.”

It’s that element of surprise that Helt believes is driving a thirst for stories that span multiple genres.

Although stories written primarily in a single genre often have elements of another, such as a quest fantasy with romance elements, to be truly cross-genre, “there must be two different genres such that if one was removed, you’d have a completely different story.”

And if we think this is unheard of, consider such modern stories as Outlander (romance or historical?), Girl on the Train (thriller or mystery?).

Helt proposed two major ways to subvert reader expectations in pleasurable ways – changes in either substance or style.

Substance subversions include putting archetype characters in new roles or positions, perhaps turning a warrior figure into a mentor. Another way to subvert expectations agreeably is to tease readers’ expectations of structure. Perhaps, as in Outlander, a romance doesn’t end up “happily ever after,” while still supplying enough emotional steaminess to satisfy readers of the genre.

Subversion can also occur through variation of the elements of writing style – “the way we structure prose,” Helt said. “How you present it on the page can influence the story.”

Common elements of writing style include dialogue, description, lengthiness, and energy. Again, citing Outlander, a romance that is typically expected to be a fairly short narrative can blossom into doorstopper size. Dialogue in a mystery expected to be stoic can turn expressive instead. Descriptions expected to be concise can become detailed.

Admittedly, changes in style elements alone “are not enough to make (a story) cross-genre,” Helt said, can still afford readers the delight of surprise.

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Still to come, the return of Shayla Raquel for a discussion of book launches and William Ledbetter’s discussion of writing and marketing short fiction. Also, since I’ll be returning for a second year as slushpile reader for DL Hammons’ WRiTE CLUB, I’ll offer hints from last year about what caught my interest from submissions to that contest. Again that deadline is coming up fast -- April 19.

Tuesday, March 24, 2020

WORDfest’s virtual incarnation + WRiTE CLUB mayday

I remain awed by human ingenuity in the face of disaster. Scarcely had last weekend’s North Texas 2020 WORDfest been cancelled by quarantines to combat the COV-19 pandemic than its organizers put up an online version so amazing – with multiple days of workshops, games and word sprints -- that I’d root for it to be an ongoing phenomenon. 

True, participants weren’t able to gorge on freebie candy from authors and vendors, but we could sign in, not just from North Texas but from anywhere in the world through Zoom and multiple social media outlets. And though nothing quite beats being shoulder to shoulder with fellow writers, not to mention being sneezed on by them or having to line up for restroom stalls, may I plead with next year’s organizers to consider hosting a virtual WORDfest alongside the in-person one?

Shayla Raquel
Whether virtual or in-person, there’s always too more than one person can take in, so I’ll only provide snippets of a few workshops. Please excuse the even less than usually perfect pictures – they’re screenshots of often in motion presentations, beginning with Character Sketches: Know Your Protagonist Inside & Out, by writer/editor/marketer Shayla Raquel.

To the writer’s version of the chicken vs. egg conundrum – character vs. story – Raquel’s answer is both. “I’m going to talk about your story because characters drive story. . . a character sketch is an outline that asks and answers questions about your novel’s character.”

Admitting not everybody does this, she feels it’s important even for pantser writers “to know how your character will behave and react in any situation.” 

She breaks character sketches into The Basics (name, gender, age, nationality/ethnicity, religion); Backstory (including family); Physical Characteristics (height, build, hair/eye color); Distinguishing Physical Characteristics (mannerisms, habits, physical flaws such as scars and tattoos); and Emotional Characteristics (personality type, using Myers-Briggs or similar tests).

For physical characteristics, Raquel is a fan of online images, admitting having built entire Pinterest boards of characters’ features. For help with emotional characteristics, she suggests the personality types listed at truity.com. Writers in search of interesting characters can browse lists of famous people who shared aspects of particular personality types. Think your character might be an-2 INFP (introspective, intuitive, feeling, prospecting) type? Consider famous INFP’s most likely Princess Diana, Fred Rogers and William Shakepeare!

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And then there’s writer/organizer supreme Tex Thompson. Take a look at this shot of her leaning into the screen, characteristic red cowboy hat on head, and you know for sure she’s no introvert! Besides moderating the chat and doing dog know what else, she went online with A Query Home Companion to discuss the oft-dreaded topic of literary query letters (and why it’s never too early to think about them). 

Tex Thompson 
Tex organized query elements into: openings (1-2 sentences); hook (or as Tex noted helpfully, the “movie trailer” and story overview, 8-20 sentences); book data (title, word count, genre and comp titles – 1-2 sentences); relevant author qualifications (1-2 sentences) “what makes me uniquely qualified to write this”); and closing (thanks for consideration, etc., 1-2 sentences).

On comp (comparative) titles, “Show you know what’s happening in your genre,” Tex said. Don’t list more than two titles, at least one of which should be a book, published within the last five years. (Hint: unsure what titles to compare to? Ask your beta readers!)

On the question of relevant author qualifications, Tex’s litmus test was to ask, “does this make me uniquely qualified to write this?” Things that are relevant include membership in professional organizations and even a local writing group, “which shows that a person is serious.” (Hint: be sure the group’s online site will make it – and you – look good for being a member.) But if writers feel they truly have nothing, Tex assured, “It’s OK to skip this part. It’s better to go too little than too much.” 

Things she urged us not to include: bio fluff (kids, pets, hometown); value judgements (“groundbreaking,” “thrilling,” etc.); your mailing address or phone number (it’s email, remember); the agent’s mailing address or phone number; and any unnecessary white space. Don’t make the agent scroll any more than she has to.

Tex’s six-point guide to the body of the query – the story overview was: 
·       Status quo (ordinary world)
·       Disruption (inciting incident)
·       1st big choice/solution
·       Consequences/fallout
·       2nd big choice/solution
·       Stakes/ “or else” (But don’t give away the ending!)

Keeping these elements in mind, Tex said, will also help when the time comes to write back cover blurbs. In fact, she recommends writing (but not send) queries even before the book is completed, to be sure the story is meeting all the needed elements. “It’s never too early to encapsulate the story!”

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Still to come from WORDfest, genre bending with Amber Helt, and conversely, not reinventing the wheel with Michelle Stimpson, the best ever book launch, again with Shayla Raquel, and how to write and market short fiction with Nebula award-winning author William Ledbetter. 

But first a plea. For all writers and readers who love DL Hammons’ annual WRiTE CLUB contest, now is the time to come to its aid. Hammons had planned to announce the contest Monday, only to find that he lacked the necessary slushpile readers to make it happen. WRiTE CLUB needs 15 readers to winnow the offerings from the writers who sent nearly 200 submissions last year. As of this writing, he only had 10.

After entering as a writer for a few years, I signed up to read last year. Yes, it’s time consuming – each submission is a 500-word excerpt – but worth it. The reads were fascinating and I made numerous virtual, sometimes real-world friends from the experience. Contact his site and let him know you want WRiTE CLUB to continue!